Add a specific example.
The move that turns 'people often struggle with this' into 'here is the actual thing Chandra had to do on Tuesday'.
Your writing is abstract. Every paragraph is one level of generality too high. Readers will nod without absorbing it. This prompt finds each place that needs a concrete example and drafts one.
THE PROMPT
Read this text and identify the two or three places where the writing has drifted into generality without a concrete example. For each, do two things: 1. Quote the abstract sentence. 2. Draft a specific example that could sit right after it. The example should be: - Named (a person, product, or place, not "some users" or "a company"). - Time-stamped (a day, a week, a specific decision moment). - Ended in a specific outcome or observation, not a lesson. If I've given you enough context to draft the example, do it. If I haven't, propose the *shape* of the example I should write and leave placeholders: [WHO], [WHAT ACTION], [WHAT OUTCOME]. Do not rewrite the whole text. Do not lecture me about "showing not telling". Just the abstract sentences and the drafted examples. Text: [PASTE TEXT HERE]
Abstract sentence:
"Users often struggle to complete complex tasks when the interface asks for too much at once."
Suggested example:
"Last October, Chandra — a nurse practitioner in Ohio using our platform to file quarterly reports — hit the third form-field asking for a National Provider Identifier and closed the tab. Support saw eleven identical drop-offs at that field in the same week."
Abstract sentence:
"Onboarding matters more than most product teams realize."
Suggested shape:
[COMPANY] was seeing [X% D1 retention] before [SPECIFIC ONBOARDING CHANGE] and [Y%] after. The change was [ONE SPECIFIC UI DECISION], not a redesign.