Cut the adjectives, keep the meaning.
The pass that turns 'a powerful, elegant, intuitive solution' into an actual sentence about what the thing does.
Your draft has too many adjectives. Every third word is 'robust' or 'seamless'. It sounds like every SaaS landing page. This prompt strips them out and replaces each one with the specific fact you were reaching for when you typed the adjective.
THE PROMPT
Rewrite this text by cutting hollow adjectives and replacing them with specifics. Rules:
- Delete: "powerful", "robust", "seamless", "intuitive", "innovative", "cutting-edge", "next-gen", "world-class", "state-of-the-art", "elegant", "beautiful", and adjacent softeners ("just", "really", "very", "quite", "somewhat").
- Where an adjective was carrying meaning: replace with the specific fact I was pointing at. If you don't know the fact, insert [SPECIFIC?] and I'll fill it in.
- Preserve: adjectives that name a category or a measurable property ("hexagonal", "stainless-steel", "500-page", "eight-year"). Those aren't hollow.
- Preserve voice. Do not add flair. If the sentence is boring, boring is fine — I'll add specifics.
Return the rewritten text only, no preamble, no notes at the end.
Text:
[PASTE TEXT HERE]Before:
"Our powerful, intuitive, seamlessly-integrated platform provides innovative solutions for the modern enterprise."
After:
"Our platform [SPECIFIC? what it does] and integrates with [SPECIFIC? which systems] for [SPECIFIC? which kind of enterprise, and what problem]."
Before:
"He gave a really passionate, quite compelling speech."
After:
"He gave a speech about [SPECIFIC? topic] — [SPECIFIC? one detail that made it compelling: a story, a stat, a moment]."